
Sundown brings on the reduced heat
Wind whispering to sail with the tides
Vapors tread quietly upon the feet
Decisions enter & thoroughly abide
Lonely bird settles down on the rails
Experience brings on a sullen glow
We cannot escape when life fails
Currents grip & provide the undertow
This is beautiful, your poetry really pulled me into the moment. Excellent Captain Q.
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I can still remember writing it on deployment several years ago. I’m glad you like it!
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Poetry is like a photo, it takes us back into a moment. It’s lovely.
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